Second haiku
Second haiku
Toxic like kisses
A path of broken wishes
The weak me misses
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 19th Jul 2011 23:03
maybe-
like toxic kisses?
very neat all the same-thanks Charlene.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thu 21st Jul 2011 17:06
Stefan is right. This is brief and powerful - I like 'toxic like kisses' which brings 'kisses' into place to highlight 'misses'. Well done. How did the exams go?