Furry purry

Stretching yawning licking

Full of feral secrets

Sniffing sneaking snapping

Silent sly



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winston plowes

Sun 10th Jul 2011 23:48

Yes, they are all those things and more arn't they. :-) Win x

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 10th Jul 2011 11:21

I assume diamante refelcts the shape both physical and word count 1-2-3-4-3-2-1.
not sure about the idea of shape in poetry, too many compromises. The line "full of feral secrets" is sharp though!

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Sun 10th Jul 2011 01:34

Quite descriptive this and to the point - I'm reasonably fond of cats except not having one myself it makes my garden a fair target for all the neighbourhood ones who like sprainting everywhere including up my front door

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 8th Jul 2011 13:04

A 'diamante' poem, quite a delightful 'form', with many variations acceptable.

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