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carrion

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The ravens’ claws keep steady grip

on this castle for their keeping.

Winds whistle through empty squares.

Not even a shard of glass remains to rattle.

 

Stark on this buttress cliff

the stones look out to sea.

I thought it must have been

the isolation hospital.

 

Saw in my mind, islanders tucked up

sweating out the fevers and the agues

oblivious of crashing waves.

But I was wrong.

 

Lower down a jagged quarry crouches.

It never made much money,

but this ill-starred trade was enough

to cause a hospital to be erected.

 

Now raven’s wait for meat again

perhaps remembering

the heady and dramatic days

when labouring men were carrion.

◄ glastonbury musings

wind in the chimney ►

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Elaine Booth

Wed 6th Jul 2011 22:29

You conjured this up so well, Ann - I could smell and feel the wind off the sea. You have a talent for making the reader feel as you did on that certain day and time. The image of the feeding raven begins and ends the poem beautifully, underlining the fraility of man's endeavours while nature carries on unperturbed. X

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Sun 3rd Jul 2011 16:36

what a beautiful carry on!How I wish I could fault your poems-I,ll catch you out one day(in my dreams).Absolutely brilliant poem Ann.Thanks.x

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Hazel

Sat 2nd Jul 2011 22:43

Love this Ann the Ravens keeping and waiting.

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Sat 2nd Jul 2011 18:03

great poem & LOVE the last line - I bet you were well chuffed with that :)
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Philipos

Sat 2nd Jul 2011 15:27

Ah yes - the desolation of abandoned places - think you mentioned it was in the offing - I sense your bond with the place - you have taken something away but a part of you remains. Nice atmospheric poem.

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