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Rhymes

I write in rhymes,

to make hard times seem easier defined,

as a chorus of growth and empowerment.

 

Thoughts become relevant,

in opposition to benevolent ways.

Far behind me are my self-destructive days,

that phase.

 

Our existence is melodic.

A gift.

Still upon it,

we place expectations and material needs,

all this feeds society's greed.

 

Rhythm is power,

and in that crucial hour,

I feel the flow of courage to say no,

to shepherds of weak sheep.

 

A soulless being is no being.

 

We need to be being, more honest about this human race.

A race undefined by the colour of our face, the god we believe or the views we don't share.

Warfare emerges from ignorance in this place.

 

Our one world, in rhymes, might see better times.

Emerging from our song an understanding of right from wrong.

Rhymes saved me, saved many, so I hold my pen to save more,

lay here on my floor, rhyming our better world.

 

See even as a young girl I see what's wrong.

Why war and this politics don't belong.

All these people of power set to devour.

Our melody.

 

We must spit back verses of power.

Empowerment beyond violence.

Bring rhymes to existence.

Show united resistance.

In our rhymes.

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Comments

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Amy Houston

Fri 24th Jun 2011 17:02

Thank You so much ladies, your comments made my day. I love the little verse Rachel. xx

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Laura Taylor

Fri 24th Jun 2011 09:15

Yup - another fab piece of writing Amy! Too many good lines to pick out a few, and I do love how you've emboldened certain lines in this. The flow is just lush

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Rachel Bond

Fri 24th Jun 2011 02:05

i like your rhymes this scheme is a dream

'all these men of power set to devour
our melody
'we must spit back verses of power.'...beyond violence.

smashing!

sometimes a rhyme skips time
and in the lines that we write
we hide, love and fight
but keep secretly
the pragma of prose
and real-time decline of words
where youd meet me
and look in the eyes of my poetry
raw in accent
and stilted grammar
the rules of this worlds
school unified stammer
dictated.
spit finer ideas, lit with primer
we just make it up
and they cant fake it love
so keep it up
keep it loose
like a 5 star cruise liner...

thanks amy





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