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Cross the Crimson Tide

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Cross the crimson tide

That snakes, dividing the vale divide

With stories I was plied of hero’s who’d death defied

How they’d crossed the crimson tide,

They lied

Deep inside I’d tried

Failed to reach the other side

My demise can’t be denied

Body tossed by crimson tide

Cascading down the vale divide

Like a child’s toy down playground slide

I cried out in great pain, inside burst outside

Flumes of red shot out as my to be corpse and rocks collide

Free this soul from this corpse boat

That bob’s like a cork on crimson tide

Free this soul before the devils hotel is spied

A dark, dark place to reside

Cried my last tears for redemption

Celestial light picked out my bobbing corpse

Heavenly intervention had spied

The devil cried

A hand scraped out the remains of purity from my soul

Joyous tears explode

Tied to a pure white dove, bourn to the apricot white tide

On Gods side

Floating above crimson tide

See me slide up the children’s slide

Inside a new body I now reside

Have you the faith to cross the crimson tide

That snakes between the vales divide?

 

©Phil Golding 07/08

 

 

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Philip Golding

Mon 14th Jul 2008 23:50

Thank you to all three for your kind comments, This poem does mean alot to me on a personal level. It pleases me that fellow poems see some of the spiritulism within these words

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Philip Golding

Mon 14th Jul 2008 23:50

Thank you to all three for your kind comments, This poem does mean alot to me on a personal level. It pleases me that fellow poems see some of the spiritulism within these words

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Philip Golding

Mon 14th Jul 2008 23:50

Thank you to all three for your kind comments, This poem does mean alot to me on a personal level. It pleases me that fellow poems see some of the spiritulism within these words

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Mon 14th Jul 2008 23:21

Hello, Philip

Your poem has deep spiritual base… I found your write very unique and special.
Thought provoking shows a destiny that we have ahead of us…

“Tied to a pure white dove, bourn to the apricot white tide
On Gods side
Floating above crimson tide
See me slide up the children’s slide
Inside a new body I now reside”
Beautiful work!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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clarissa mckone

Sun 13th Jul 2008 05:56

HI Phil, Nice poem, in ways I could picture it all, wonderful words that make pictures!

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