Sullen fallow hollow
Reckless shadow tremor
Moving smoothly.
Not a lot of vision.
Stick thin wisdom.
Sullen fallow hollow
Technical menace
Rendered useless.
Fruits of disorder morethan
Capable of failing
The last glance of sad fathom.
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<Deleted User> (8730)
Fri 18th Feb 2011 11:38
Very goodf, but I don't understand it. It is not about ploughing?
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Fri 18th Feb 2011 16:28
This seems to me more about revolution, not clearly understood in purpose and 'capable of failing'. All the words are fabulous, swollen with inherent ideas. 'fallow' is great - 'lying in rest for new seeding'. 'Hollow' without sufficient understanding, or the 'ruts' you can't climb out of. 'sullen' angry but not really effectively active. Kealan, I'm probably whistling in the dark. But it's a super poem to stimulate ideas.