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What I did today, hey

A sunny day hey hey a sunny day

A mummy day hey hey a mummy day

A sunny day a mummy day hey hey

Hey it was sunny saw my mummy hey

 

A funny day hey hey a funny day

A yummy day hey hey a yummy day

A funny day a yummy day hey hey

Hey it was funny it was yummy hey

 

The sun shone and I went to see mum, hey

We had some laughs and had a big lunch, hey

The sun always shines on motorways, hey

Can’t open window then, get damn hot, hey

 

A sunny mummy funny yummy day

Banoffee, coffee, sticky toffee, hey

◄ Rain in the arse

666 - A beastly sonnet ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Tue 1st Jul 2008 17:11

Hey hey, it sounds like you both had
a really great day, hey hey.
Glad you weren't singin' in the rai- ay- ain
Brilliantionionioni.
Love Janet.
ps. did you see the comment on your profile?
you can use my email on my profile.
love janet. thanks mate.xx

<Deleted User> (4281)

Tue 1st Jul 2008 03:54

Hello, Antonio

Did you write a lyric this time? It sounds that I could have sung this as it has an even beat to the written word. Excellent write, it shows your happy mood and time that you enjoyed spending with your Mother, if I am correct guessing. Nice style, quite different from your previous poems that have been reading.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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