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 He stands in line like a trusting child

 Who dares not ask permission. Envelope

In a tight-white hand, held to his chest.

 

An electronic voice, dog-like and flat,

Summons the line forward a step.

His overcoat is unraveling like an old flag,

And his thoughts are too: torn things,

Out of place, which is why he has them

Quarantined in stiff manila A4.

 

The card is crumpled from weeks jammed in pockets,

Dumped in drawers, used as beermats, coffee

Coasters, never posted because he cannot,

Even now. Every word of his is a violation

And the illuminated numbers, knifelike, are

Poised to cut him short and correct him

And then this awful voice directs him

Another pace towards the counter.

He takes it like he’s stepping off a cliff

And trembles, as all furtive, shrinking

Creatures will, in sight of the horizon.

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Elaine Booth

Tue 1st Mar 2011 20:01

You have painted a wonderful picture with words.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 3rd Feb 2011 21:33

loved it!-ta-SW

Miles Hadfield

Wed 2nd Feb 2011 11:55

The Post Office! Poor sod had some court documents and looked as stressed as owt.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 1st Feb 2011 21:29

Has me wondering does this Mike..lots of great line within, enjoyed reading reduced to clear too.. :)

<Deleted User> (7212)

Tue 1st Feb 2011 20:48

... this is queueing at Argos, isn't it ?
I'm right, aren't I ??

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