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Identity! Is it a dream?

 

 

Is true identity just a mythological dream?

A construction found in a thought stream

Uttered to show degrees of conformity

In a world that demands degrees of normality

Where attempts to root identity only serve to derange

When our society is fluid, a kaleidoscope of change

Is identity buried at the heart, within the inner child?

Described somewhere on some document misfiled

Persona loses its lines of distinctiveness

When you’re set adrift in a cultural wilderness

Attempts to be part of a community with rights

Ends up on street corners, embroiled in fights

Where human emotions translate from inner coil

Into bloody attempts to bring individuality to the boil

Is true identity just a mythological dream?

WELL THIS IS MY IDENTY, HEAR ME SCREAM

© Phil Golding 06/08

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5090)

Mon 30th Jun 2008 20:54

I Totally agree. Had very similar thoughts. Loved this poem

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sun 29th Jun 2008 21:17

Hello Phil,
Your poem rings bells with me. It reminds me of when i" lost my identity" when i was married.
Then when you're set free and find yourself once more, you want to shout it from the rooftops.
Although it probably has a different meaning for you, it just goes to show how others can see something of themselves in other peoples work.
Great poem, great statement.
Janet.x

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