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stratigraphy

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Dig deep and delve

Go underground

beneath life’s leaflitter.

Explore stratigraphy.

 

Go below earth’s annual pulling curtain

where earwigs scamper

and woodlice curl and cower.

Go down down down

‘neath roots and worms and skulls and crowns

and roman glass and buried urns of bones,

patterned crockery and unexploded bombs.

 

Igneous, calcareous, metamorphic.

Caverns where pot holers no longer struggle.

Along the twisted seams of alchemy and miners’ dreams

and iguanodon and ammonite.

Tombs, cave-wombs and catacombs,

graves of the men who never even cried,

dismembered warriors and Harold’s eye.

Mesolithic arrow heads, golden torques curved like the moon.

Tears shed for a lost ring.

 

And the lost ring.

There, in darkness’ paradigm

dig dig and delve until

you find your heart.

 

◄ daughter

love visits from another planet ►

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Elaine Booth

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 22:08

This was a "wow" poem for me - I loved it and felt the listing perfectly echoes the layers whilst the perceived jumble really didn't strike me that way, it is literally what it is like to dig deep down. I love the choice of words - I love the richness and evocative power of technical or scientific words: eg. "Igneous, calcareous, metamorphic". x

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Greg Freeman

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 10:54

I also think this works very well. "roots and worms and skulls and crowns / and roman glass and buried urns of bones, / patterned crockery and unexploded bombs": there's a real music to this. Words have been chosen very carefully for their sound in juxtaposition to each other. I like the idea that near the bottom is Harold's eye. A reminder that England's history could have been so different!

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Dave Bradley

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 10:46

I have to respectfully disagree with Graham. I feel the jumble beneath our feet does reflect very well the jumble beneath our conscious minds and love the idea of 'heart' at the bottom of it all. Really enjoyed.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Nov 2010 18:35

Thanks Graham. I guess I was delving down into the earth as an archaeologist might do. A description of that mishmash of things and their respective meanings - or maybe they have no meaning at all? It WAS a list really, but I hoped that the language and the images would carry it through. xx

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 21st Nov 2010 16:30

Ann, a lovely idea that I felt was all mixed up. At times it seemed that it was listing eras and items etc.
For me a closer correlation between the what and the when would have made it more powerful. Super idea though.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Nov 2010 11:27

I'm sorry I seem to be saying SSSSSHed - not got me teeth in straight - joke!

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