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Congruence

Enjoy the rain

feeling my pain

 Narcissus

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 4th Nov 2010 22:39

Janet - you're obviously onto something here with these mini-haikus; -is there a formal structure here for these last few? Liked it a lot. B

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 4th Nov 2010 16:36

Good one, Janet.

Is it possible that it might be:

Feel the rain
Enjoying the pain
Narcissus

I have this idea that narcissistic people like to be 'martyrs'? I may be way off base. Someone will certainly jump in and tell me so.

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winston plowes

Thu 4th Nov 2010 15:55

...and enjoyed this little one too. Win x
Was toying with something myself last night where each section ended in a flower name. there could be an expansion here for you too e.g

love the bride
nowhere to hide
carnation

(Although obviouslt not suggesting these actual words) lol

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