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Ejaculation Is King

Shooting your load at least

three times a day

in the same way you

shoot your poems.

Hot and mad, burning

behind the eyes,

the maniac’s grin,

the words no one’ll know

but you. These

dirty nothings are

all your own,

you speak them to yourself

over and over as

you rub it out, as

you work it.

A gush, a spill, a flow

everywhere. Just

a madman in this room now.

Speak to your hand if it

makes you feel better.

Come on!

Everybody does it!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 15th Sep 2010 11:46

Well, the best for last? Bold and brilliant language for an interesting subject. No one is going to challenge your 'manhood'; if it empowers your brains, go for it. But, maybe, that is why the 'lover' of your dreams is no longer with you - too much sex required on a daily basis.

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Isobel

Tue 14th Sep 2010 12:24

Tee hee - yes there are a few people who write like that - an interesting analogy David.

I like the build up you achieve in the poem - the use of repetition and incrementation - it almost feels like something is being punished...

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