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The cloud garden

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The cloud garden forbodes a thunderstorm

A reckoning for afternoon of sun

The birdsong quiets, a sense of alarm

And disappointment marks an end to fun

Four blackbirds suddenly fly formation

While solo magpie spies from aerial

Signalling that there’s nothing to be done

As dandelion seeds float by, wish well

An unseen thorn deflates the paddling pool

As I trim overgrowth that must be shorn

Through sheer necessity cut back Eden

Even my leg is cut, see my blood spill

It’s cooled further now; inside where it’s warm

We’re hedgehogs hibernating, TV on

◄ Home Thoughts From A Bored

Dark June ►

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<Deleted User> (4281)

Sun 1st Jun 2008 23:14

Hello, Antonio

Another fascinating poem - I could easily paint a picture of that garden. The feelings are wonderful when reading your write. The only sad part was when you cut your leg and the blood spill...Hmmm...I hope it was just another Imaginary stuff… Great photo!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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