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Bite The Bullet

Sitting with the gun,
Staring at its dead black eye,
a cycloptic reaper.
The end of all things,
Just a finger stroke away.
Yet still I linger.
 
Do I greet the end?
Welcome the darkness gladly?
Stop the sorrow now?
Perhaps I should wait,
Pray for better tomorrow,
A much brighter day.
 
Can future hope be,
Enough to stay my finger?
A hollow promise.
A decision made,
Barrel against my temple,
I bite the bullet.

Bullet

◄ Same Old Tired Shit

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Isobel

Mon 13th Sep 2010 18:16

A very dramatic one Steve - you seem to be strong on this kind of impact poetry. Have never contemplated it myself - though a few may wish I had...
Pulling something other than a trigger normally helps the spirits immensely. Great take on the theme! x

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Cate Greenlees

Mon 13th Sep 2010 11:37

Another clever way of interpreting the title. You get the idea of impending doom over well here Steven. Contemplating suicide is a dark and terrible place to be in.
Cate xx

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