Was this the plan
That he leave me behind
Alone
To slowly die - to cry
Was this the plan
That I become invisible
To walk in the rain
So that tears and pain
Stay hidden
Was this the plan
That some great seer
Who sits on the other side of Eternity
Could say
Yes this is the plan
This is the way its going to be
We always knew
Did you
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 15th Sep 2013 22:58
hey Jean-dont forget the '?'s...xx
ta very much one and all :)
like Ann, I identified, nicely done.
I find this poem very easy to identify with! Maybe we are in the same boat? love AF
Hi Jean i like this one ...makes me think about when people say that your life is already mapped out for you...best wishes bernadette
<Deleted User> (7212)
Tue 24th Aug 2010 22:43
Hi - I really like this one. all the best. B
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 16th Sep 2013 16:22
awwww! I was quite moved by this fabulous poem Jean.I love all your different approaches to poetry,I'm not keen when poets write in a 'one paced style way'.
Please do keep them coming-love-Solar.x