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he moves through the fair

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His life was a roller-coaster ride

A “Look! No hands!” experience

With the smell of chip fat and gallopers

And the tang of candyfloss on the evening air.

A fairground of tawdry prizes

For the winning.

 

Girls eyes flash as he lights a cigarette

And a gold tooth and a gold earing glitter.

Pretty legs dangle from the ferris wheel,

Fluffy toys are hugged to warm young bosoms.

And all the girls are screaming.

 

The cacophony of music changes

As he moves through the fair.

Tune replaces tune, a collage of sound,

Then, all fade.

 

He’s on the outskirts now,

The edge of the field

Where grass grows rank

And yet sweet smelling.

 

A rustle of petticoats and a hint of Coty

And she’s there.

A Luxsoft cardigan and a string of pearls.

Not long ago a virgin,

Now his girl.

 

And every night she waits for him

As the gentle dark draws in.

And with her pointed pink girls tongue

She kisses soft the gold earing

Licks the blue tattoos

And feels the biting of the golden tooth.

 

 

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Steve Smith

Thu 19th Aug 2010 14:42

I like this poem very much - a nice piece of evocation.DO you know the song? My young love said to me/"My mother won't mind...one of our haunting melodies but the words were from Padraig Colum.
Lovely creation yours.
Steve Smith

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Thu 12th Aug 2010 22:51

I had a vision of a younger David Essex type character sporting that gold tooth - a very evocative poem Ann :)
Oh and Gallopers smell of toffee apples and candy floss from the smears left by their passengers....

Best wishes, Dave

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 16:52

You'll be sayin' "Annie I'm not your daddy" next! (You aren't are you?? xxx

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 16:47

I hoped the gallopers might smell but wasn't sure if it should be diesel or oil (are they the same??)(or manure??) I LOVE all those smells! coolannxx

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