When Day Is Done
When day is done, perhaps I’ll sleep
Without the need for counting sheep,
and Lethe’s flow will drown my dreams.
The nightmares of nocturnal screams
all gone, although the price be steep.
If Thanatos decides to keep
me in his grasp, then do not weep,
for I’ll be done with such extremes
when day is done.
Across the Styx I’ll softly creep,
where you won’t hear me, not a peep
until such time the doom Death deems
to take you from these mortal schemes,
and to Elysium you’ll sweep,
when day is done.
Rolph David
Sun 30th Mar 2025 10:54
Trevor,
The way you intertwine mythology with reflections on mortality is truly captivating. References to Lethe, Styx, Thanatos, and Elysium add a profound depth, inviting readers to explore layers of meaning within your words. These classical allusions enrich the poem, making the journey from life to death feel both inevitable and almost serene.
Cheerio,
Rolph