A forgotten England

the song of the slumbering summer season of 1914 under whitespread skies 

in the depths of my daily despair
obsessive thoughts, songs & stories,
coil and twist me into words, 
in this wise fool’s daily darkness
 I finally find my feet: moving
under the whitespread skies
of a forgotten England.

 

memory, a mere nothing, always incomplete;
curdles thoughts of my sorry England, 
words  emerge as I peek
into the past, words entwine my restless mind,
under these same whitespread skies;

amidst this current chaos, a spasmodic light gleams,
a harvest moon, a friendly old lunatic,
like me, and so many of my forgotten comrades,
who stalk this poor man’s sky with grace and poise
time drifts by, becomes a beacon of hope, 
in the presence of the risen sun;
we find solace, as time drifts away,
as we learn to cherish the live-long day….

Oh, the power of rhyme, in beaten times like these,
healing wounds, giving us breathing space,
to build shrines of words for all our
lost boys and girls in all their dear-bought
unaccompanied grace.

stranded they may be,
but they set their spirits free 
with hearts on fire
‘neath this whitespread sky
where softly this song was sung
one slumbering summer night, so long ago,
in old England - et in Arcadia ego

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◄ UNTRODDEN WAYS

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John Marks

Sun 30th Mar 2025 20:38

Thank you Rolph for taking the time to write about your reaction to my poem. Apologies for the late reply - I was in hospital for surgery, on the mend now. We carry the past in our genes, it is the past that makes us the (wo)men we are. If we fail to respect the past, we fail to respect ourselves. British history seems to be a closed book in schools these days: we need to open that book up. If my poem provided the smallest chink of light on the enormity of our collective past it did its job. John

Rolph David

Wed 12th Mar 2025 17:37

Hello John,
The way you weave together memory, loss, and reflection is truly powerful - just great!
The way you weave together memory, loss, and reflection is truly powerful. The imagery of "whitespread skies" conjures a deep sense of evocative nostalgia, capturing the essence of a time long past. The blend of personal turmoil with collective history creates a poignant contrast, especially in lines like "we find solace, as time drifts away." Your tribute to the "lost boys and girls" feels both tender and honouring, reminding us of those who live on in memory. The reference to "et in Arcadia ego" deepens this, suggesting that even in the most idyllic of times, death and loss are present, linking the past with the inevitable passage of time.
Thank you for these lines.
Regards,
Rolph

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John Marks

Wed 12th Mar 2025 13:15

Thank you for taking the trouble to like and/or comment, so thank you Flyntland and you Uilleam in particular. My maternal grandfather was alive in the summer of 1914 prior to spending four years on the western front. All he said was that 'it were a different country then, before t'Great War and what comed after." Spanish flu, I surmise.

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Flyntland

Tue 11th Mar 2025 21:46

exquisitely beautiful - sadly dreamy and reflective,

"as we learn we cherish the live long day " perfection.

Thank you for writing this beautiful poem.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 11th Mar 2025 20:12

oh well, perhaps not Lark Ascending!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 11th Mar 2025 19:51

Thanks for that, John, and for a beautiful picture.
As for Nimrod, I've had the great pleasure of playing that on a church pipe organ, not very well, but it's the kind of music that transports me into another world.

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