It is a soft day

A day to watch the mizzle ‘cross the bay

that masks the heathered hills in swirling grey,

and swallows the horizon in its sigh

where even hungry gulls refuse to fly,

and seek their sheltered spots to hide away.

 

Inside we wait until the gloom will pass,

watch burning turf reflecting in the glass,

and in that warm reflection reminisce,

relive those golden summers of the past,

renew the glow of memory’s caress.

 

Wrapped in that warmth there’s nothing needs be said,

no questions to be asked, no tears to shed,

for all the future’s set inside our heads,

and when the greyness clears and sunlight spreads,

already we can see the path ahead.

 

Whatever moods afflict the fickle sun,

through everything we two will move as one.

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Comments

Rolph David

Mon 10th Mar 2025 17:07

Trevor,
It is a soft day is a truly wonderful poem. The way you portray the quiet beauty of a grey day and transform it into a moment of peace, warmth, and connection is extraordinary. I love how you use the soft, reflective atmosphere to highlight the strength of shared memories and the comfort of being together. The imagery of the burning turf, the golden summers of the past, and the promise of moving forward as one creates such a feeling of serenity and hope. Your poem beautifully reminds us that, even in moments of gloom, there is always warmth and light in the bonds we share. Just great stuff!
Regards,
Rolph

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Flyntland

Sun 9th Mar 2025 20:32

beautiful - gentle and calming, a poem to read over and over again. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 9th Mar 2025 09:05

A beautiful, uplifting poem, Trevor. Thank you.

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