Topography
My memories of you are messy.
They play outside of the lines
and ignore in what manner
we promised things would be,
and how we were looking
at completely different maps.
Comments
Enjoyed, the opening couplet is excellent.
These incredibly brief little pieces make a huge impact when delivered like this! So much said in so few lines. Well done indeed Mike.
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Mike McPeek
Wed 12th Feb 2025 23:54
Thank you Ray and Graham! Apreciate you sharing your thoughts on this piece - cheers!