where I couldn’t go home

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That hamlet where mum's lineage dwells,
Ancestral ruins, where silence swells.
Foundation stumps, a faint design,
A phenomenon strange, yet mine.

History breathes in broken stone,
Family lore in whispers grown.
Sights and sounds, scents of old,
Stories in these ruins unfold.

But in this decay, a shadow's cast,
A reminder of life that cannot last.
Bulldozed, ground, swept away,
Mortality's echo, can't win the day.

So for now all I could do is roam
away from where I could not go home.

 

 

 

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 3rd Dec 2024 15:50

A lovely sonnet WSDs
Its being personal helps bring out the emotion.

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Ray Miller

Mon 2nd Dec 2024 10:08

Cracking opening line and the rest is pretty good.

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