Daydreaming

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Sometimes she sat there next to me far away.

I imagined she could have been talking with the stars

and looking at all the colors she could taste there.

 

Or far away of a different kind; ancient Samarkand maybe.

I had no idea where she might go. I would always be patient though,

and wait for her return.

 

We would often speak about her journeys

looking out our front window at a garden of roses,

with thorns we were never afraid of.

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Mike McPeek

Mon 23rd Sep 2024 13:51

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece Holden and Uilleam!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 23rd Sep 2024 06:58

Thanks Mike.
"...thorns we were never afraid of."
lovely.

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 23rd Sep 2024 00:40

A beautiful poem, Mike; the last two lines are heartwarming and meaningful! 🌷

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