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The ferry waits

Like a fought-over bed, the ancient rock
tumbles, crumbles to the shore.
The ferry waits to leave the dock.

Spinning, wind-whipped, on the loch,
struggling against nature in the raw.
Like a fought-over bed, the ancient rock.

The waves heap up, a sudden shock.
Forget for once the thoughts that gnaw.
The ferry waits to leave the dock.

Did you count me lost as you eyed the clock?
Did you think of calling in the law?
Like a fought-over bed, the ancient rock.

Relieved, you try hard not to mock
when you come smiling to the door.
The ferry waits to leave the dock.

Watching the sunset, taking stock
together, wondering what's in store.
Like a fought-over bed, the ancient rock.
The ferry waits to leave the dock.

 

 

 

Villanelle

◄ A foreign wood

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Comments

Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 6th Apr 2024 11:36

Thank you so much, Greg! I enjoyed reading this poem. I like this style of writing. Your profile is another one that is open to me. The other profiles are closed.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 5th Apr 2024 07:56

One of those mad moments that you attempt just after turning 50, Steve. Well, I did, anyway. The wind blew me up the loch until it eventually narrowed enough for me to wade to shore. If it had been blowing in the other direction, out to sea ... thanks for reading. And thanks for the Likes, Stephen, Holden, Hélène, Manish, and Hugh.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Apr 2024 07:46

This is clear and readable but still conveys an air of mystery, Greg.
I enjoyed this one.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 4th Apr 2024 09:32

Well, I've only written the one, Graham. But thanks. Twenty years ago?! Who knows where the time goes, as Sandy sang ...?

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 4th Apr 2024 08:48

I find villanelles both intriguing and exasperating. Half of me loves the cleverness and the other half is frustrated by the complexity.
Well written Greg. You were much younger then 😇

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