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War Dancers

Dancers scatter shapes through fields of war:

Dancing around the stink and smell and sweat,

Dancing to a tune or to a heartbeat,

Dancing for their supper, dancing on the dead,

Dancing through the bullets and the bayonets,

Dancing on graves and above the pyres.

It once was simple: sessions at the barre,

A bit of matinée soft-shoe shuffle,

Of tip-tap or baggy-trousered ballroom.

Now a new rite is writhing and churning

And dancing is non-stop, until you drop.

The chosen ones prevail; the rest crumble:

Falling off the wheel and left to flounder.

Shorn of limb and bone, we shall all succumb.

War

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 14th Aug 2023 07:00

Thank you, Graham and Uilleam. These are fascinating comments. The notion of music and dance being represented in (and ultimately being brutalised by) war is both intriguing and terrifying. In a way, war can be presented as a horrifying dance, which ends in exhaustion and death. Any beauty in this only exists from the comfortable vantage point of peace.

And thanks to Nigel, John C, Manish and Koya for liking this.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 12th Aug 2023 13:24

In Igor Stravinsky’s "The Rite of Spring" (Le Sacre du printemps) the ballet depicts aspects of pagan Russia; "The Chosen One" (a young girl) dances to death in the presence of the old men, in the great "Sacrificial Dance" in which the god of Spring is appeased.

As ever, beauty and innocence destroyed for the sake of ugliness and ignorance...the rhythm of life now the rhythm of death.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 12th Aug 2023 11:04

When I was growing up my life was all football and cricket et al nothing remotely feminine in those days.

As a adult from a staunchly working class family I now find my leisure hours more and more involved with watching ballet and opera performances (even though I do not understand or want to, what is being sung and danced about.

Music and movement (remember school) are the most important aspects and can be found in war and peace. Beauty and Beast!

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 12th Aug 2023 10:41

Thank you for liking this one, John, and to Greg too. Your support is much appreciated.

I was thinking of a ballet 'barre' when I wrote this line, as a warm up for performing dance routines.

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john short

Sat 12th Aug 2023 09:34

Bonjour Stephen,

Not quite sure what 'sessions at the barre' means.

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