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The Flowerpot Men

We were born in the same year

at the dawn of the brave new Elizabethan era.

Men-children fussed over by Little Weed,

often collapsing at their own jokes,

cackling, pots rattling, guffawing.  

 

The strange figure with squeaky voice

they occasionally met in the wood gave

me nightmares. Growing older

we smirked at the druggy connotations.

I saw them as dazed, strung-out, crawling

 

out of their horticultural crash pads after bad trips

or hangovers. Hanging loose. Some people

had no time for their games, nonsense talk;

maybe it was just a blokey thing.

They cavorted while the God-like, unseen man

 

who worked in their garden of Eden

took his lunch break. But did He,

like the Little House, know everything?

Everyone remembers a Bill and Ben.

Perhaps all those benders caught up with them.

 

◄ Unhappy landings

Unplaced at the Simonside Country Fair ►

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raypool

Fri 11th Aug 2023 21:01

Very enjoyable piece with a large dose of nostalgia Greg. It reminds that in 1976 in a 90 degrees working man's club I witnessed Mike Reid(the comic) doing all those little voice impressions, going out on a limb I thought!

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Wed 9th Aug 2023 14:14

Thanks for your comments, Uilleam and Steve, and for the Like, Holden. For those baffled by the subject matter, Bill and Ben were two puppet characters in a children's TV programme in the 1950s. As Steve will know, this poem is included in my 2021 collection 'Marples Must Go!'

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 9th Aug 2023 09:52

Those Bills and Bens,
familiar faces in my local over the years, known for their penchant for exotic substances.😎

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 9th Aug 2023 09:17

Fascinating, Greg. It reminds me of Jasper Carrot complaining about the programme which replaced the Magic Roundabout. 'It's for kids, isn't it?'

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