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The World I Created

I created a world

Where you were here

Holding me still

Despite it all

 

The world is coated in fallacy

And dumb hope

and lost love

And grief

So much grief

 

The world is yellow and bright

And filled with stars

And surrounded by flowers

And it holds all that is good

All that is beautiful

 

The world, I know,

Is not real

For how could anything pure

Exist in a world of temptation

And greed and evil?

 

How could anything pure be anything at all?

◄ Graduation

To the Lone Star ►

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purplemoon

Fri 16th Jun 2023 01:46

Thanks everyone! Your words mean a lot to me.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 15th Jun 2023 09:26

The world is yellow and bright
And filled with stars
And surrounded by flowers
And it holds all that is good
All that is beautiful

Lovely words purplemoon
It's good enough for me-thanks for that.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 15th Jun 2023 04:31

A good poem this, Layla. Intriguing and poignant. More please!

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Bethany Sallis

Wed 14th Jun 2023 10:59

Give me the directions-please! 👍

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