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Snowdrops

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Tread softly, the poet said, on my dreams.

Ukraine: a girl with a hunger for life

Took a detour on her way to school

To pick some early snowdrops for the class,

And some as a present for the teacher.

Cowardice is not equal in a war:

If you run from fighting, you are punished,

But if you scarper after laying mines,

You are feted as a hero, adorned

With medals, as your unknown victim nears.

Her tread was soft, but to no avail;

The dumb device makes no such distinction.

Her dead hand still held the snowdrops; her dreams

Live on, caressing the hopes of us all.

Ukraine

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 19th Feb 2023 16:52

Thank you Uilleam and Hélène for the interesting discussion. The subject of this poem was the brutal, indiscriminate nature of war. I can see that many events will play a part in leading up to a war and I can well understand that Russia saw itself as being humiliated by the West in the 1990s, which led to the coming of Putin. But ultimately the decision to invade Ukraine was unprovoked and was a brutal manifestation of delusions of grandeur.

And my thanks to Pete, Rudyard and Mystique for the support.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Feb 2023 11:18

I've had a read of that article Hélène, and found it interesting and enlightening.
I've been making honest attempts to understand what is the root of this conflict, without jumping to kneejerk conclusions.

Thank you to all who work for peace in whatever way you can: sometimes people such as me just have to live with our impotence-frustrating as it is.
💓

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Hélène

Sun 19th Feb 2023 02:11

For those interested in psychology of tyrants, here's an article on Putin that I found insightful. https://www.pacesconnection.com/blog/how-vladimir-putin-s-childhood-is-affecting-us-all

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 18th Feb 2023 13:47

Perhaps I should make myself clearer.
The targetting of civilians is indefensible.
The invasion of Ukraine is indefensible.
Why has it happenned?
Does Putin view a Ukraine within NATO as an existential threat to Russia?
If he does, why is that so?

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 18th Feb 2023 07:34

Thank you, Uilleam. Yes, the innocent always suffer. As to the blame, I don't think there's any real doubt.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Feb 2023 11:52

I've been watching and listening to various points of view about this war.
I'm moved to ask: who should shoulder the blame for provoking it?
Russia?
NATO?
The US?
Ukraine?
The Ukranian Neo-Nazis of which there are undoubtedly some?

Whatever the answer, the innocent, as always, suffer.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 15th Feb 2023 21:44

Thank you for the kind comments, Greg. I saw the first snowdrop of the year the other day and it's beauty made me think of the contrast with this horrible war, now approaching its first anniversary.

And my thanks to Nigel, Holden, Graham, Purplemoon, Stephen, Clare and Laura for your support.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 14th Feb 2023 10:01

This is a particularly heartbreaking poem, Steve, more so for its delicacy and determined optimism at the end.

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