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The songs that I hear

The songs I hear,

So melodious and eloquent

The stories I read 

So intriguing and fluent

 

But, when I attempt to create 

What I think to be my literary best

My drivel could, really,

Drive a hornet from its nest.

I get the phrase,

Not the apt usage,

I wish to express,

Without sufficient verbiage!

I get the lingo right,

But not the intonation.

Or great rhetoric ,

Missing the pronunciation!

Its quite a struggle,

To have the gift of gab – 

but to miss the command of language

is a major handicap!

◄ For her sake

What are we lonely for? ►

Comments

tryingthings

Sat 12th Nov 2022 15:51

Thanks! 😀

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 11th Nov 2022 17:53

Sounds ok to me!

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 10th Nov 2022 23:07

Drivel!? says who? certainly not me! This poem is a gem ( P )







Rose 💋

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