Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

A Hopeful Tail

entry picture

The Landrover bounced rapidly over the cumulus and cirrus

finding the Great Gate unlocked and opened wide.

A fine welcome she was given, with smiles and widespread arms,

and full angel choir to receive her, as certainly due

to one who had faithfully maintained her youthful promise,

and had always done her best even when severely tried.

 

Then a disorderly yapping silenced the angels

and a sudden flow of living soft brown fur,

pointed ears, stubby legs and foxy faces

miraculously appeared from behind a nearby cloud.

She was of course delighted to find them all admitted

although aware that one ot two were undeserving

and did not strictly qualify for such merciful forgiveness.

 

Seeing Saint Francis dishevelled and slightly out of breath,

then noting Saint Rocco with a plaster on one heel,

she gave both heartfelt thanks and all her gratitude

for taking care of the rowdy  pack in the interim

whilst waiting for her to join them and finally take over.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

◄ The Moroccan

A Mellow Yellow High ►

Comments

Profile image

John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:27

Super poem, Jennifer. Touching, light of touch and humorous. Loved it 😀

Profile image

jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:46


Thanks Frederick, Stephen A, and Holden for the likes, and Graham for the comment. Graham, perhaps you think most of them went down below?! Many of the ancient ones yes, but I think there have been some recent ones who deserve better. She certainly did.

Profile image

Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Sep 2022 09:47

I wonder whether Heaven has kings and queens? There's a thought!

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message