Counting fingers

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Shall I count
my friends? -
use my memory
or my fingers?  -
 
when looking
in the mirror
do their smiles
smile back? -
 
when wiping cutlery
does the weight
of near
forgotten voices
hang heavy? -
 
or do they shine
for me 
a laughing knowing gleam
of welcome? “
 
Words and image Tommy Carroll
 
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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 30th Jun 2022 23:34

Thank you Carol, I appreciate your engaging help.
Tommy

<Deleted User> (33719)

Mon 27th Jun 2022 23:30

Really like this poem Tommy.

'when wiping cutlery
does the weight
of near
forgotten voices
hang heavy? -' especially this stanza.

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