Tears of trepidation along
the tracks of expectation,
because a presentiment said
it can't possibly work, this
attempt at a paradigm shift
out of moroseness into the dream
of hope's wiles, for the future
treasures your trials, and
plans to set them free just when
you've told despondency to flee!
<Deleted User> (32907)
Wed 20th Apr 2022 01:47
Well written and well expressed. Thumbs up for this Holden.👍
Wed 20th Apr 2022 01:39
Thank you so much for the kind comment, John, I truly appreciate it! I wouldn't have even written the poem if it hadn't been for your suggestion to try the 'tears' challenge! 😎
I recognise this battle between hope and dispondency so well. It often ends in tears.
I love 'hope' s wiles'!
Phenomenal, Holden, as ever! 😎
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Holden Moncrieff
Wed 20th Apr 2022 02:05
Thank you so much for your kind words, Ursula! 😊