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The Point

Without art, there would still be shapes,

Dancing in your dreams.

But what would be the point?

 

Without love, there would still be glances:

Random, half-welcoming, half-shy.

But what would be the point?

 

Without faith, there would still be queues,

Credulous, consenting in their fear.

But what would be the point?

 

Without music, there would still be noises:

An unexplained anvil ringing in your head.

But what would be the point?

 

Without hope, there would still be a future,

Stretching out blindly along a tarmacked road.

But what would be the point?

 

Without forgiveness, there would still be compassion;

Your punishment rescinded, by instinct.

But what would be the point?

 

Without happiness, there would still be laughs

And sudden invasions of uncontrolled warmth.

But what would be the point?

 

Without sadness, there would still be tears,

Trickling, uncomprehending, on to your bleeding lip.

But what would be the point?

 

Without all this, upon this Earth,

Who could tell how much things are worth?

There would be birth, there would be death,

But there would be no life, just breath.

 

◄ Nureyev

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 26th Feb 2022 16:57

Thanks also to Rudyard and New Shoes.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 25th Feb 2022 17:28

Thank you, Julie. I think it deals with an important subject. Glad you enjoyed it.

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julie callaghan

Fri 25th Feb 2022 17:19

One your best, in my opinion. Thank you Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Feb 2022 15:33

Thank you, John.

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John Botterill

Wed 23rd Feb 2022 15:08

Fantastic. Typically wise and perceptive, Stephen. 😀

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Feb 2022 15:06

Thanks to Nigel, Graham, John, Holden, Pete and Clare for liking this poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Feb 2022 15:05

It's very kind of you to say so, Greg. Your comment is really appreciated. Life would be poorer without so many things (including poetry, of course!). We should be grateful if we have the chance to experience them.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 22nd Feb 2022 22:32

This is a remarkable poem, Steve. You have really achieved something here. A paean to the human spirit, perhaps.

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