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Observer

On the outskirts of a sadness

otherworldly that casts one

into the mould of observer, 

a mere overseer of self

who's no longer tethered

to the entity observed, 

the very entity that can

no longer be embraced

as one and the same,

no matter how congenially

the arms are outrstretched. 

◄ Presence

Transubstantiation ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 1st Jan 2022 20:59

Thank you so much, John! 😊

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John Botterill

Fri 31st Dec 2021 22:18

Deep deep deep and thought- provoking. Thanks, Holden.

Holden Moncrieff

Fri 31st Dec 2021 02:09

Thank you for the kind comments, Moonlight, Kishore, and Stephen, they are greatly appreciated! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 30th Dec 2021 16:41

A fascinating, mysterious poem.

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kishore karunik

Thu 30th Dec 2021 05:15

Beautiful

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Sunshine

Thu 30th Dec 2021 02:06

Deep and dark. Intriguing 🎓

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