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A way back

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Tracing the tracks of our

childhoods along paths

muddy after rain. The woods

where we played now

a ‘nature reserve’, with

a ‘wildlife pond’. The way back?

 

We haven’t been here for decades.

Follow our familiar brook

to the river, upstream

of the sewage works,

disturb a heron and a coot.

Another label: Elmbridge Meadows.

 

Seems wilder than we remember.

Burdock, comfrey, hornbeam,

white willow. Behind a seat

in a clearing someone lives in a tent.

November sun. Newcomer parakeets

rent the air, plumage glowing.

 

◄ Vincent in Spitalfields

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Greg Freeman

Wed 3rd Nov 2021 16:48

Cheers, Stephen. If you leave it too long to revisit the past, it's hard to find your bearings. That's what we found!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 17:03

Thanks, Greg. A lovely poem. We used to roam a place called Bluebell Woods, near Rainham in Essex, and it occurs to me we never saw a single bluebell!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 16:19

Many thanks, Graham. I must confess (I don't think William ever did) that I could not have written this without the assistance of my wife. She looked up all the names of the plants and trees on her phone app. And she spotted the tent in the woods. She is my Dorothy!

Thanks for the Like, Holden.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 2nd Nov 2021 14:38

I've had couple of 'going back' walks with some old school chums (albeit around our village) and they evoke some incredible memories. Like opening a box and they all fly out.

I like this Greg, great observational stuff. Parakeets and tent-dwellers add a brilliant edge to this.

Well done!

G

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