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Spy derr

You’ve captured me

In a web  I’ve woven,

 

That I placed at your door 

for you to come over

 

To seduce me with your fluttering eyes

To entice me out of the safety of life.

 

To whisper the intoxication

To vaporise my mind with elation

 

To take my hand and lead my mind

To bright sunshine that leaves me blind

 

But frees my body and frees my soul

Prevent my heart from feeling cold

 

To make it pound deep in my chest

Before I am aloud to rest.

 

Your face so close to mine I see

Your inner soul, it peers at me.

 

And melting into soft soft eyes

My life before my mind just flies 

 

Where have I been for all these years

Struggle, strife and many tears

 

When all I need is close to me

And I hope will forever be.

30/10/21 21:10-21:29

 

 

◄ Going under

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 31st Oct 2021 16:33

Thanks very much, love is a really difficult emotion to capture.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 31st Oct 2021 09:20

Great read, and a nice turnaround that the spider is trapped in his own web. 'To vaporize my mind with elation', describes so well being in love, and the last two verses are touching.

Jennifer

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