Read my Mind....

Saturday 29th March 2008 2:18 pm

Here behind these eyes
Lies a labyrinth of thought
Rows upon rows of mind
Dream wistfully away

I turn to you and smile
A message unresolved
Yet tenderly unfolds
To share with you this day

Come here and read my state
Now know this honest space
For here in lies the realness
So definite defined

As every passing glance
Draws closer to this place
These eyes are open wide
For you to read my mind

Alison M Dunn

The Ghost of Me ►

Comments

Francine

Wed 15th Apr 2009 00:38

I love this Alison!
You write so beautifully... and you express many of my same sentiments...

<Deleted User> (4744)

Wed 21st May 2008 16:21

Definately a theme to your work as I myself step back through time to comment, I feel you are a very spiritual person and often find your misunderstood. That's what comes through to me from your poems. Appologies if I am personallising work that is poetic license or written about another.

<Deleted User> (4235)

Fri 18th Apr 2008 03:59

I love how this poem opens like a rose in bloom. Every word brings an image of running through a maze of thought with words etched within the labyrinth's walls. The eyes are windows to the soul, and your mind is a blueprint of discovery and beauty.

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