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Watching a sunset from the downs

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Let us try

to pause the mind

unwind the dizzy eyes

sing a song for calm

and just listen

to the silent music of the stars

to the overture of the moon

to the speech of the seasons

to the symphonies of the sea

let the sunset flow

between you and me

rest the words in a poem

◄ Eyes of the clouds

With verve ►

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Robert Black

Fri 28th Mar 2008 10:57

Very evocative, nicely done. I love the idea of giving the words a rest by putting them in the poem!

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Fri 28th Mar 2008 10:26

A perfectly enchanting poem Niel. I love the imagery.

Mel
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clarissa mckone

Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:24

ok not sure how that happened, sorry

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clarissa mckone

Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:23

very nice poem, full of peace

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clarissa mckone

Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:23

very nice poem, full of peace

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clarissa mckone

Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:22

very nice poem, full of peace

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clarissa mckone

Fri 28th Mar 2008 02:22

very nice poem, full of peace

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