mAd ShAdowS

Summer shadows grace my step

Stretch before me sun behind me

Giant legs and giant arms 

dance like puppets with boyish charm

 

Few days bring such playful dance

And when they do it is by chance

The sun it rests in the just the place,

The causes smiles upon the face

 

A moments joy a moments laugh

As I wander on the short cut grass

Dogs now tired with giant jaws

Great long legs , enormous paws.

 

Wander home in glowing rays

The sun sinks down with orange days

To close the eve in peace and calm

That nurses us through ‘til dawn

 

12/06/2021  21.20-21:45

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Leon Kamm

Sun 13th Jun 2021 12:44

Edbreathe the quality of your verse is at odds with the format of your titles. Though I guess it give you a sort of USP. For the avoidance of doubt, this piece is v.g. imho.


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