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Those Days...

 

On those good days - I can smile without a pang
On those good days - I recall all those I rang
On those good days - my heart soars with the lark
On those good days - when I wander to the park

And on those good days, if some pain comes to my mind,
I can hold back the angst all the better because you are so kind.

On those bad days - I will reach to find your hand
On those bad days - let the time slip by like sand
On those bad days - when my heart sinks down so low
On those bad days - I will know where I must go

So on those bad days, I will think of you and know,
I can cope with almost anything, within your loving glow.

©Rhumour 
July 16th 2010


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Heather

Fri 16th Jul 2010 20:32

You have a very powerful voice and the simplicity of these words is beautiful. I felt that the repetition worked well and it flowed very nicely. Thanks for the read.

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