Somebody Just Prayed For Me

I can feel it            the undeserved derivation 

from darkness            the welcome light

                          through disbelief a light 

on fire 

like some flame sketched 

in burnt oak I                                                   seek

advice from the great grey sky

and full

black muck like mucus

comes sloughing off the brain 

as wasted paint

that never did match the colour

of the world the moment leaves

 

Thank you

The Grinding Day Starts With The Heart's Spark ►

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Seth

Tue 3rd Aug 2021 19:59

Thank you Laura for such wonderful feedback

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Laura Taylor

Tue 3rd Aug 2021 16:30

Can't believe no one is commenting on your work. It's excellent.

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