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I AM

I am the darkness that devours the light

the stealer of the light

bringer of chaos.

 

I will take your love and

use and abuse it

I shall steal your life.

 

I will strike down your children

their heads a necklace

around my bloody neck.

 

I will watch and cry tears of joy

as you suffer for eternity,

your pain and suffering

shall bring me endless comfort

for you are not worthy of my love.

 

I am the stealer of souls

the corruption within you,

I shall tear asunder

those who have scorned me,

I will crush and grind their souls to nothing

I shall feast on their spirit's.

 

I am the darkness that devours the light

the corruption within you

the stealer of souls

◄ just a couple of questions

My Heavenly Guardian ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6484)

Thu 8th Jul 2010 17:00

Hi Cynthia, good to hear from you again and thanks for your comments.

Mai Pen Rai is Thai, the nearest I think you could get in translation would be "no problem" lol

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 8th Jul 2010 16:01

Powerful ideas from your pen once again. Perhaps you would explain once more what your name means?

<Deleted User> (6484)

Wed 7th Jul 2010 17:03

Thanks for taking the time and for your comments

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Chris Dawson

Fri 2nd Jul 2010 10:03

My first thought was - yes, I think I've met you, maybe even dated you at one point ;)
The imagery is strong, but it feels unfinished ... you've introduced yourself (or your character's self, whichever) ... now what?
Cx

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