Trees That Now Span The River

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The raging force of the River Lune

as storm Christoph reached his peak

On the verge of being swept away

the river bank left ravaged and weak

 

Weather beaten, battered, torn down

ripped from their roots in the squall

The old trees that now span the river

once stood deep rooted, strong and tall

◄ Robin

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julie callaghan

Tue 26th Jan 2021 11:17

Thanks for the generous comments and likes Brian and Paul, also thanks for the likes Aviva and Stephen A.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 25th Jan 2021 21:36

Probably your best Julie in its tightness and rhythm.

I like the use of the possessive pronoun relating to Christoph.

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