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Let Me In

You’ve built walls against suiters

To hide your persona

You’ve locked yourself inside

To protect your heart

I’ve made it pass the gate

I haven’t gotten through to you still

On your door I’ve knocked every evening

You pretended you ain’t heard

I guess you are still at war

With your heart and mind

Let your mind do decide

Because your heart is mine

We’ve been on different sides of the line

On conversations close to the truth

I’ve yelled out words of my expressions

You responded to please my thoughts

We can talk or maybe not

I’ll wait here till you open up

I’ll be leaning on your door pleading

Jane Doe, Please! Let me in  

◄ Home Alone

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:41


John Doe - Wikipediaen.wikipedia.org › wiki › John_Doe
"John Doe" and "Jane Doe" (for females) are multiple-use names that are used when the true name of a person is unknown or is being intentionally concealed.


Name is intentionally kept a secret in this case.

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Hugh

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:58

Oh my goodness she must be terrified of your constant knock,
And reading your poem, out of her mind she will block.
The passion and destruction is taking over your mind,
Write something different and to her be kind.

Jane Doe was a young girl murdered in 1976


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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:48

It is just that Jane Doe is a term I understood is used when they find a dead body and can't identify who it is yet.?

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:33

? No, it's all love no murder.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 13th Dec 2020 09:01

Is this one supposed to be about a stalker who is intending to murder the resident female? If so, then it tells the theme effectively - but if not, not.

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