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let go

i think it is time to let go

 

the cloud is forming again

the dark is calling again

my heart doesn't beat the same

smiling doesn't feel the same

people scare me now

i am alone now

rebuilding this heart which was stolen

i can no longer feel broken

 

i think it is time to let go

◄ i am not your path

does the wind fly ►

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Hugh

Mon 14th Dec 2020 04:42

Simple, unique and full of meaning. Well done.

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jezzalee

Sat 12th Dec 2020 21:57

aww thank you so much! i know my stuff can be a little gloomy, but as i am making my way to the light at the end of my tunnel, so does my writing. i'm so glad you liked it ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 12th Dec 2020 20:13

This is heart stopping and heart starting stuff.
I like very much how at first it worryingly seems as if you are thinking of letting go of yourself, perhaps even your life but then gloriously you are found 'rebuilding the heart which was stolen' and letting go only of whatever had troubled you before.

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