August is a great month for star gazers!
Fully clothed
With naked eye
She gazes upwards
To a moonlit sky
A mighty presence
Swiftly felt
Orion appears
Only wearing
A belt
She's waited here
Till an early morn
For his shimmering touch
On a summer's dawn
The hunter haunts her
As Venus looks on
But when sun arises
Her lover is gone
Thanks for your poetic comment Paul and Amatul Thank you for reading aswell?. To all who liked. I do appreciate it and will make sure to read some of your pieces over the next few days.
Don you never fail to make me smile. And there's me trying to be all poetic about astronomy and how spectacular the night sky is at the moment ?
Amatul Wadud
Fri 7th Aug 2020 06:32
Romantically sad!! ??
Did her lover disappear cos she remained fully clothed?.....
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Various
Fri 14th Aug 2020 01:10
I loved reading this, I liked the imagery and the loss of love.
Really well crafted. Did it take long, it feels like one of those pieces that are just a flow of consciousness?
Whatever its beautiful.
Is there an element of yourself floating in it above us?