Fledge: Jonathan Humble, Maytree Press
Jonathan Humble lives in Cumbria, and is an observant cheerleader for the natural world. This meticulously crafted collection is suffused with a love of nature, and of birds in particular. A number of the poems are laced with humour; but there are distinct moments of melancholy, and pain, too.
There are also several poems about childhood, a subject that might well interest a primary school deputy headteacher. âFledgeâ, for example, returns to old haunts in Goole in east Yorkshire. Humble remembers games played close to Philip Larkinâs train route to London, âunaware of summer weddings and passing poetsâ. âOne Called Paulâ recalls the childrenâs rhyme, with the poet worried about a young bird that appears reluctant to fly away, while in âFireweedâ, beneath the punning with the wildflower name â âhe peed higher, spat further, swore louderâ â the early death of a childrenâs gang leader is mourned.
Humble is by no means sentimental about the natural world. He admires the effect a hawk has on the local bird population âneighbourhood watchâ in âAdrenaline Junkieâ: âcar alarm blackbirds ⊠scaring little brown jobs witlessâ, and exults in the appearance of this âstriped waist-coated bullyâ. In the last stanza he appears disappointed, as no doubt Ted Hughes (a far more brutal poet) would have been:
no satisfying explosion of feathers
at the end of a breakneck career
through the field by his hedgerow,
planted fifteen years ago in hope of encounters
with feathered adrenaline junkies,
looking for thrills and spills
and old dozy pigeons.
Yet there is also the rueful humour of âSchrödingerâs Mouseâ, which recounts the poet taking the time and trouble to humanely remove a mouse trapped among his raspberries, to woods a mile away:
Your love of my raspberries has resulted
in this late evening walk in headtorch,
to hedges of hazel and blackthorn,
far enough from home to foil ideas of return.
Aware of owls ripping through moonlight,
I knee in damp fescue and sedge,
clutching this tilt trap of quantum uncertainty:
mouse or no mouse? that is the question âŠ
He sums up the dilemma of a lover of wildlife, and of raspberries, in the final stanza, with a reference to the tales of Lakelandâs Beatrix Potter: âBut, unlike Mr. McGregor, as I stumble one mile / back through darkling woods, soft clart that I am, / Iâm hoping the owls have an off day / and secretly, despite your fruit plundering, / Iâd quite like to see you again.â
There is more trademark Humble humour in âIncomingâ, once deservedly selected as a Write Out Loud Poem of the Week, as he takes cover from a hostile curlew: âHow were you to know, / my crescent-beaked nemesis, that I am, / in fact, a fully paid up member of the / RSPBâ.
âIn Boots Like Theseâ we see a Wordsworthian transition from âroads and high riseâ to ârock and rootâ, as the poet transports himself from âwalls and traffic and business plansâ to landscapes that cleanse the mind of âbinding cares; locked-in despair ⊠this mind made free to feel again. / Iâll live and breathe in boots like these.â
Two poems about trees â âLittle Rowanâ and âCaught in Concreteâ - reflect a tenderness for the young and vulnerable. He offers to relocate a sycamore âshooting from damaged concrete ⊠free from a cemented aggregate / destined to limit lofty plans?â
âLeveretâ, after a poem by Carolyn Jess-Cooke, is achingly painful:
I walked on broken glass, endured the lightning
And carried you one last time in the autumn,
Until with curtains closed amid the silence,
I placed the hares and wee blue shoes in cotton.
Yet even in the depths of winter, Humble finds himself able to look forward, to the âwelcome return of African visitorsâ in âComing Homeâ, and in this poem, too:
Ahead are days when looking out of windows
will be rewarded with scenes of hectic flight,
the freshness of a clear cobalt canvas,
arrowed shrieks slicing through a wintered condition,
lifting the darkness of a seasonâs sadness
and easing the debt so I might breathe again.
(âAnd Yetâ)
The enchanting cover illustration is by printmaker Suzi Thompson, who is based in South Yorkshire. These are beautifully structured poems, with a warmth for the natural world that makes one think of John Clare. In his lyrical opening poem, 'Dandelion Sun', Jonathan Humble attempts to encapsulate a philosophy, a âtrust in truth ⊠that will not fail at duskâ. A wise, and often wonderful collection.
Jonathan Humble, Fledge, Maytree Press, ÂŁ7

Jonathan Humble
Fri 31st Jul 2020 10:30
Soooo happy with this lovely review from Write Out Loud on the publication of Fledge. Thank you Greg Freeman.
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