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Ronseal

The tin does exactly what it says on it.

 

McDonalds

Loving im it.

 

Argos

Shop for it. Don't argos it.

 

Weetabix

Have your weetabix had you today?

 

Thomas cook

Just book it don't cook it Thomas.

 

Morrisons

More morrisons to shop reasons at.

 

Nike

Do it just.

 

Pringles

Can't you just stop you pop once

 

Dr Pepper

Can that happen? whats the worst

 

Cream egg

How do yours eat you?

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 19th May 2010 01:20

Hi Kealan,

Neat idea this, that would merit expansion. Reminded me of Yoda speak in "The Empire Strikes Back."

regards,
A.E.

<Deleted User> (6488)

Tue 18th May 2010 22:47

I really liked this. It had this tone to it that kept me in tune with what you were saying. Your words have a biting effect in this poem. I enjoyed it all. Keep writing.

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