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DO I DESERVE IT

Do I deserve it,

Tell me do I deserve it,

I said do I deserve it.

Happiness, love, compassion,

Do I deserve it.

Companionship, faith, trust,

Do I deserve it.

Loyalty, respect, honesty and understanding,

Do I deserve it.

Better yet don’t I deserve it.

Why don’t I deserve it,

Why not me,

I suppose I could be better and do better.

I suppose I do have my own flaws and demons,

But don’t we all,

Because if it is so then we are all undeserving,

And that is a reality I refuse to live in.

◄ HURT

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Comments

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Maatla Mog

Mon 6th Jul 2020 23:24

Thank you all for your kind words.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 6th Jul 2020 14:35

Really masterly in expressing our common self doubts and sense of guilt and inadequacy. The repetition of deserve holds it all together.

Jennifer

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Mon 6th Jul 2020 01:12

You deserve
Your soul is pure
You are honest
God gives everything when we are ready
And when God has plans to give
None can stop those blessings

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