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Yet Untold

Grind the wheat upon the stone that we may bake the masters bread,

Bind the feet to shape the bone and lay down in the masters bed,
It’s a cold hard trope to grip the throat and stop the screaming,
And a bold heart’s hope could slip its rope and drift if it just stops believing,
Hold hard to the seamless, senseless dreams of yesterday,
Cold hearts cannot seem to dream those dreams again today,
Born as the foil of tragic toil and suffering too large to measure,
Scorned and bespoiled by mutterings from those with hearts as tough as leather,
Let the whip lash at my back it will not break my spirit,
Let the ship crash with a crack upon the rocks with all still in it,
And in that swirling foam let all with heavy pockets sink,
To them the whirling water’s death, to us it’s just another drink,
And let their, “Precious treasures,” drag them to the depths to see no more,
As those who understand their measure drift on to the distant shores,
And as they stand upon the sand cold and naked but still breathing,
They will understand that they were saved by understanding meaning,
The dreams that told them, “You alone will live when others can’t survive their greed fuelled drownings,”
“You and you alone will thrive and strive to live as one with your surroundings,”
“No more will you grind corn for those obsessed with taking all they can,”
“You’ll take only what you need and share it with your fellow man,”
“For utopia is not a place of effigies or needless riches cloaked in gold,”
“But a cornucopia of such grace and beauty that is yet untold.”

◄ Broken Toys

Rich ►

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 1st May 2020 07:51

Yeah if I'm honest Jennifer I didn't fully know where I was going with this one, but I knew the rough direction.
You're quite right, the references to binding feet, grinding wheat, chains and whips were all references to slavery of different kinds, and a metaphor for our relationship with our greatest slave master, greed. Money, trinkets etc, and how much in the end the, "Need," for all this crap weighs you down and drags you under, and in the, Great storms," of life, and in life in general that being content with taking only as much as you need is lighter on the soul.

J. x

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jennifer Malden

Thu 30th Apr 2020 18:39

Liked this although have to admit that I don't fully understand it- Slavery, or just exploitation of unfortunate people?!'Bind the feet 'makes me think of Chinese girls of the past. Beautiful language anyway, and full of indignation for past and present injustice.

Jennifer

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