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My Neurons They Are Groaning

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My Neurons They Are Groaning

 

My neurons they are groaning

Under all my rhyme

Why are you always whipping us

Whipping us big time?

 

You should be grateful neurons

With all your dose of whip

If not you'll get slack, lazy and

My poetry will slip

 

Gosh!, can't let that happen...

 

Quick, whip us some more....

 

 

Don Matthews April 2020

 

◄ My Rhymatic Friend

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Michael Triandam

Tue 28th Apr 2020 15:10

I have to teach psychology in school next year and I have been reading all about neurons....so I gravitated to this poem immediately. It would be cool to image the brain of a poet and see what areas light up...it also reminded me of the Rumi poem of the chickpea complaining to the cook...Cudos!?

<Deleted User> (24283)

Sat 25th Apr 2020 08:49

Your neurons are looking like corona scare....hehehe....don't let it slip, if it does, then who will fix it...n who will make us laugh smile.

Craziness overloaded...
.corona times

Philipos

Sat 25th Apr 2020 08:41

I know what you mean Don. I think penning on WOL has kept a lot of us from going Pluto. Now there's a challenge - how about writing something about the cosmos! I think it's where Thalia lives these days, with her writing bureau close to Aries. ?

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